I said in a previous post that I was going to blog an erotic book. Well, this is the beginning of my adventure in writing a long piece of erotica and posting as I go along. This truly is the first draft – I am doing exactly as I said I would and writing it week on week, although I’ve altered my plans a little, in that I’m going to post the book every Wednesday. When it’s finished, I will revise (and revise and revise!) and edit it, and it will be available as an ebook and, if there is a demand, also in print.
I would love this book to be as good as I can possibly make it. With this in mind, I invite comments and suggestions to help improve it in the redraft process. Feel free to post a comment if you’d like to help, or ‘like’ it if you think it’s working, or contact me directly by email with your thoughts.
I hope you have a good time reading – and if you enjoy the story, too, then that’s even better!
UPDATE:
I have removed this blog post. The book is currently being revised and edited. It will be out in the near future.
Ina x
Ina Morata 
Reblogged this on Shallow Thinking.
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Thank you so much!
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Excellent beginning.
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Thank you so much, Dorothy! I know you know what you’re talking about, so that means a lot to me. I feel that the female protagonist still needs some depth, though, even at this stage, and I also wondered whether it would seem strange to some readers that she just becomes compliant so quickly. But, speaking personally, I know how easily it happens…!
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I write a blog series, too, and look forward to reading yours. Love the pen name, btw. 🙂 ~Dave
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Oh, wonderful! I shall check your blog series out. 🙂 Pleased you like the name, and I hope you find the series enjoyable! I’ve never released a first draft before, so it’s a bit nerve-wracking…!
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Relax and enjoy it yourself. I’m sure your readers will, too! I look forward to it myself. Great to meet you, Ina! 🙂
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Thank you – I hope that’s the way it goes! Great to meet you, too, Dave. 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂 Happy writing!
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You, too! 🙂
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Such a lovely morsel to dive into while at lunch!
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Thank you! I do hope you enjoyed devouring that one! There are so many tasty morsels to this Love Slave… 😉
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You got that right! Oh, and yes, it was quite delicious.
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Excellent! I’ll have to hurry up and ensure there’s another morsel soon… 🙂
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I could go so many places with the talks of morsels…lol
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Of that I have no doubt! Honestly, all I do is feed you a line… 😉
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“Feed you”, “morsel,” I dont know if I’m hungry, horny, or both. Lol.
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Both sounds good. 😉
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Just want to say thanks for making me think of that. It was inspiring to say the least. Lol
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From what I’ve just read on your blog, it certainly was! 😉 My pleasure!
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