UPDATE:
I have removed this blog post. The book is currently being revised and edited. It will be out in the near future.
Ina x
UPDATE:
I have removed this blog post. The book is currently being revised and edited. It will be out in the near future.
Ina x
Ina Morata 
Oh, goodness. It was already hot here, but, this…this just took it up several notches. Wow!
Oh, and I liked this phrase in your story…”Clicking on it like a hawk pouncing on a fieldmouse” It evokes such imagery of hunger for what he had to say.
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Oh, I’m so pleased you thought so! I often wonder if this has been the weakest part of the story so far. But maybe not…
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It really ties the rest together. When I was writing stories regularly, there were posts that I felt the same way about. But, they were needed to tie it all together.
So, no, it wasn’t weak at all, and it was quite delicious too.
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