5 thoughts on “Love Slave Part 12 (18+ only)

    • Ina Morata says:

      Pleased you’re happy with it. I wasn’t sure I had the balance right. I think the taxi needs more work, and Charlotte’s emotions need drawing out more. And, as always, I am not sure about the power dynamic of this story. There are three more parts, I feel, to this novella. Do I continue with the relationship between the Master and Charlotte, or do I pursue Charlotte’s story beyond her dealings with him? I’d love to know what readers think of the two main characters, which will definitely influence my decision. Should this trilogy (for that is what I want it to be) promote sex positivity, or does it not matter if this is not the case? If anyone has any thoughts, I’d love to hear them.

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      • lurvspanking says:

        I think I like the option of a cautionary tale and like I said before, a bad ending for you-know-who. Maybe a meat grinder accident of a pack of wild dingoes escaped from a wildlife park. Charlotte is still kinda a cipher to me, it seems she has no will of her own but simply goes along against her better judgement.

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      • Ina Morata says:

        A cautionary tale would work, within the whole. Why DOES C keep doing these things against her better judgement? She can be very frustrating… I’m not sure I know what to do with her. Feminist tract would dictate that she discovers her pathway for herself, yet there is scope for her to discover a real relationship with someone who could develop proper trust with her. This does then lend itself to her being “saved”, rather than taking control herself.

        You really dislike you-know-who, don’t you? Your ways of getting rid of him are getting more and more inventive! 🙂

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