UPDATE:
I have removed this blog post. The book is currently being revised and edited. It will be out in the near future.
Ina x
UPDATE:
I have removed this blog post. The book is currently being revised and edited. It will be out in the near future.
Ina x
Ina Morata 
I remain hooked and look forward to the next part.
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Thanks, Missy! I hope the next part works as an ending to the first book. Please, do let me know if it doesn’t, or if you’d rather it went differently. And thanks for reading!
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I don’t know if I posted a comment before but I read the previous one, loved it and went right back to the beginning. I am not sure how I missed them. When I read part 13 I had no idea of the background and I formed was a completely different impression of his character when I read what had gone before. He has her hooked so deeply even though she wants to fight him so I am interested to know what will come.
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I’m glad you found them! Yes, he’s a strange character. I do wonder if she’s been too easily ‘hookable’, but given they have history, then possibly not. I don’t know what you’ll make of the next part, but I’m going to (hopefully) both end this one and leave enough threads to be ale to continue it in the second book. It’ll be on the blog, too. But I have a different one I’m going to blog first. Or maybe I’ll overlap a bit.
If you’ve got any comments on the story as a whole, feel free to message me. Everything’s of help before I edit.
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I don’t think she is too easily hookable. Perhaps from the point of view of her own sanity (and safety?) but not in terms of it being believable and realistic. If you are stacked that way then it is intoxicating and you are powerless against it which I think comes across. She is an intelligent and rational woman but all that goes out of the window when faced with the power of her need for Domination.
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Oh fantastic – thank you for that. It’s what I was trying to get across. I’m pleased she comes across as believable. That’s important.
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To me she does anyway but obviously I share her ‘condition’ lol
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But that makes you the perfect person to judge how she behaves! (My inclinations run down that line, too). When I have a full, edited manuscript, if you’d be interested in reading it, I’d be glad to send you one to see what you think.
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Oh definitely – that sounds like fun. I love your writing. 😊
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Awww, thank you! That’s so kind. I always enjoy your posts, too. I’ll let you know when I have an edited copy. If you still want to read it then, I’ll definitely send it to you. 😊
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Great. My email is submissy@hotmail.com if you want to get in touch.
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Brilliant! Thank you. 😊
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Loved it! Can’t wait for the conclusion. ❤️
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Thank you so much! You’ll have to let me know if the conclusion meets with your approval. 😀
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I half expected that arsehole chess master to stiff her with the hotel bill.
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No, he didn’t! But he’s not quite finished yet. You really dislike him, don’t you?! I’m delighted. 😊
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You know I do. 😀
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Er…yeah! Just a bit. 😁
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Why dislike him?
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I think you’ve missed the point of the story. I dislike him because he is a lying, manipulative, abusive creep. He’s taking advantage of Charlotte in the worst way possible. A dom should be caring towards his sub. He shows no consideration for her feelings one bit and is purely out to fuck with her mind not just her body.
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But he does care for his sub. Immensely. If he didn’t care for her so much, he wouldn’t be so comfortable pushing the boundaries so much. It shows a level of ease and trust that he has with her that he can push her this way.
I think he would be utterly aimless without her.
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He’s a sociopath at best. She’s not comfortable. He’s abusing her, plain and simple. I would NEVER treat any of my subs with such disrespect. Where’s the after care? She may be intrigued but does she enjoy being humiliated? No she bloody well doesn’t. She’s not well and he’s using that to get his kicks. He’s a sexual predator.
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