Thank you. Raw emotion was precisely what I was aiming for. I’m glad that came through. Interesting you mention that you found yourself holding your breath; I remember watching my mum read this story just after it had been published. There was a distinct point at which I saw her do precisely the same thing. (Might have been that she was remembering her naughty toddler locking her out of the kitchen…).
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Such raw emotion. I found myself holding my breath.
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Thank you. Raw emotion was precisely what I was aiming for. I’m glad that came through. Interesting you mention that you found yourself holding your breath; I remember watching my mum read this story just after it had been published. There was a distinct point at which I saw her do precisely the same thing. (Might have been that she was remembering her naughty toddler locking her out of the kitchen…).
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I loved reading this. 🙂
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Thank you very much. I’m always delighted when someone tells me they liked reading my work.
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